This is a perfect illustration of the classic FUCKU. It is a short poem of three lines, conveying defiance in either an intensely serious tone or a lighter more humorously ironic tone.
The first two lines are more widely spaced to provide support, back-up (re-enforcement) through assertive statements.
The final line is broader allowing the emotions to come to rest ( line is called a “sit on it” .)
Syllable count varies, often containing abrupt breaks.
This can be a challenging form. Some practitioners’ attempts end in a sudden stop. This version of the form is called an O-FUCKIT.
Great composition – once again, you capture modern art and social observation with your creative syncopated eye of irony . π
That just made me laugh out loud – it’s a beauty!
Fuck all of us.
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Hmm . . .
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Fuck them, too. π
Yeah! Take that!
That bench is sick of being sat upon – I said ‘sat’ upon.
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Perfect poetry or prose. Short, to the point, and message unmistakable.
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Written in a lovely lavender, even. π
Fuck u, If it’s fuck me? π
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Love! Would be great to have a large size to frame and hang on my wall!
Thank you, John. Nice compliment!
I suggest you stop writing on benches
Or what?
This is a perfect illustration of the classic FUCKU. It is a short poem of three lines, conveying defiance in either an intensely serious tone or a lighter more humorously ironic tone.
The first two lines are more widely spaced to provide support, back-up (re-enforcement) through assertive statements.
The final line is broader allowing the emotions to come to rest ( line is called a “sit on it” .)
Syllable count varies, often containing abrupt breaks.
This can be a challenging form. Some practitioners’ attempts end in a sudden stop. This version of the form is called an O-FUCKIT.
Great composition – once again, you capture modern art and social observation with your creative syncopated eye of irony . π
Haha! Oh, Joseph! π