1. mrsdaffodil

    This has the look of something that will stay in place for a long, long time. It could be the start of a series: Redundant Autumn, Redundant Winter. . . 🙂

  2. elmediat

    Excellent composition.

    Intransigent, he remained on the fence
    until he became redundant.
    Pointedly, the decay wept rusty tears-
    splinters of rotted wood.

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